Thread:Creampuffs/@comment-30541609-20170122015600

Hello.... ahh, im not good at this, but, i guess its important? Firstly, thank you so much for translating so much here, its really wonderful and theyre really smooth! Ahh, but in the main story revolution, I think there are a few parts that are missing in chapter 58..... Its hard to know, since its only english on there, and I can only guess where you have to make changes between translating literally or making it smoother for english, but some parts seem entirely gone? Ahh, such as when keito and rei are speaking;

Keito: Sakuma-san. What a rare sight to see you standing here.

ah, I think there is a piece missing from rei's response, and also some pieces before/after, but this part in particular... he says くくく. どうせ片足を棺桶のなかに突っこんだ老骨じゃ、派手に討ち死にしようが悔いは before he says more about being a soldier, and since theres no laughter or anything in the translation, i double checked. And also, at the end when souma is taking keitos orders, he say しかし、よろしいのか. このような連中を好き放題にさせて？ roughly, "But, is it really okay? For me to take care of them as I please?" It seems to be missing, I wasnt sure if your style was to condensce it more or if it was an accident or a mishap during building the page, and I didnt want to mess with it myself.... So, i was directed to you to ask. I'm sorry if i am mistaken, but i wanted to ask in case it would be helpful to add these parts! 