Talk:Ra✽bits Lesson/Tomoya Mashiro Normal Event/@comment-45386560-20200425171000/@comment-29653368-20200425182842

i fixed the pronouns, and i also fixed one of the lines in that same choice based on what i think it was originally meant to say, but i don't have the japanese to be sure that i'm correct. feel free to add the japanese underneath so that the english can be proofchecked. thank you !