Thread:Riebakkari/@comment-30159703-20170606130744

Hey, thanks for leaving me a note when you edited the translation, I really appreciate it. I made some edits on your translation, so I want to explain what I did.

This song is very prashing-dependent. Mika starts a sentence, and Shu ends it, often with a negative verb, or something contradictory. I personally think it was more important to keep this format, than to not sound awkward.

Also, -ん is a short, slang ending for　-ない. So Shu is using the negative.

This is really hard with "Elegantly / Dancing, you are not", because it really doesn't work in English. If you have a less awkward way to put it, that would be awesome.

There were several little phrases that I had issues with, like the spiral staircase, and the suede wings on the black king, so I really appreciate you cleaning those up.

Thanks for understanding,

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